It has a lot more to it than a lot of first animations, in that it actually has sound, it has somewhat of a payoff at the end, and the animation isn't too bad. It's just really short and lacks enough hilarity/violence/whatever to make it worth more than I'm giving it - you've got something going, just try to expand things into something more in depth for your next upload
Thanks jonthomson, will do longer video next time and will try making it more exciting.
What was that? Seven seconds of a woman playing with a phone? No content, no sound, nothing of interest, no idea why you would upload this.
Worth a protect. Has a bit of animation to it, tunes are OK, is a bit nonsensical in places just flicking through still images, and could do without being infinitely looped, but better than a lot of stuff that's uploaded.
Fairly limited. Graphics aren't that clean, and the range of content is fairly limited, but there's enough of it and it at least does some things right like having sounds and working buttons. Could have done with some twists rather than just a bunch of dunks/shots.
Nicely animated, but it's a bit on the short side and doesn't really make a lot of sense, or have anything that interesting in it. Worth a protect but that's about it
Dull Krinkels ripoff. Nothing slightly original here, lacking in content, avoid unless you are a diehard Madness fan and will watch anything remotely related to it.
Do not upload continual test versions of a game. Post on Dumping Grounds and get feedback from the forums.
ok thanks for you respond...
Has a decent bit of length to it, animation is OK. Only barely worth protecting because it's completely unoriginal and has horrific audio, with your own characters and style I'd probably give this 3/5 or so
Do not upload intros. Upload intros followed by actual videos. Especially do not upload intros which you will say will be used for an entirely different site.
Thank you for your comment, I did not know that. Complete noob to animation and to newgrounds. Will not do this next time. Should I take it down?
Do not upload tests to the Portal. Use Dumping Grounds if you need feedback for a 5 second Madness loop. Nobody is interested in this even if it is finished.
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