Dull, hidden object game, offering nothing that hasn't been seen hundreds of times.
Terrible animation, probably the worst sounds I've ever heard, plotless nonsense, less than 20 seconds long - this is quite possibly the worst thing I've ever seen on Newgrounds.
Does Anyone Read The Desc?!
There is no need to ever submit a test to the Portal - you can use Dumping Grounds and ask in the forums for feedback. And frankly, there's no need to submit another Madness ripoff - this is nowhere near as good as Krinkels, and nowhere near as good as any of the good ripoffs that exist, so it'll just sit with the thousands of bad versions that infect the Portal. Come up with your own ideas.
Incredibly short loop with irrelevant excessively loud music, no real story, animation is OK albeit simplistic, but without any sort of substance to it, this is completely pointless. Make it longer with actual content and basic things like a preloader and you might get something worth protecting.
Yeah sorry about the loud music i was looking into preloaders when i realized that the music was just kicking off i would have liked to have a warning. A story would be nice to and more movement with good action shots you can bet ill be working hard on the next one
Unbelievably boring parking shovelware garbage, looks worse than GTA did two decades ago, controls are horrible. Don't submit junk like this ever again.
I have no idea what that was. Seven seconds of weakly drawn nonsense. Make something more substantial next time.
Thank you for the feedback. I'll definitely try to improve on my plots in the future.
From the wiki:
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Don't keep submitting continual versions of this. Either use dumping grounds to get feedback, or just finish it.
Too short, sounds are awful, not completely hopeless but future works need a lot of improvement, particularly adding more content
Animation/drawing's a bit limited, song quality isn't great, and the movie's generally not that interesting, but there's enough there for it to get a couple of stars
Boring 12 second crudely drawn animation with no humour, no content and no reason to watch.
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