jonthomson's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[HEY]

Animation is OK what there is of it, but it's two seconds long. Make something that's a lot longer and you'll have a decent submission

LegitNoodle responds:

that isnt the point of the video but ok

[Sause ruins it this time]

Animation is OK but it's too short, nonsensical and lacking in humour. Something other than a plain white background would also be nice.

[Megaman X vs. Yoshi WIP]

If it is a work in progress, then continue to work at it and upload it when it's done. The Portal is for completed projects.

NanoSoft responds:

It IS a completed project :P

[Fight Scene]

Alright animation style and quality, decent sounds, it's just a bit short and doesn't tell enough of a story

[Poppy's Diaries - Outro]

Don't just upload an intro or an outro. Newgrounds is a place for completed works, this has no content at all.

PascalSchmidlin responds:

Okay, thank you. I'll keep that in mind for the future

[Minutemen Logo Animation]

Do not upload either works in progress, or intros which do not have an actual movie/game after them. The Portal is for finished works, so even if you ever did complete this, you shouldn't upload it. Four second clip that says nothing.

nicktobolski responds:

Understood. Thank you.

[ZOMBIE!!]

Way too short, lacking in content, but it has enough of a combination of violence/sounds/animation that it should stick around, could have been a lot better if the thing was expanded.

[Clock Day '17 retro]

Heh, better late than never, enjoyable enough, CC will never die

spitfire responds:

Never ever!

[LOGO DESIGN AND ANIMATION FOR A GAME]

This upload seemed to be lacking the actual game after it, and given that the Portal is for complete works this is a pointless upload.

JayantJoshi responds:

The actual game is coming soon this upload is for the reviews of UI ..

[TW's Story]

This is actually pretty good animation, has decent length, the audio used is solid and the backdrops are fine. If this didn't abruptly terminate in the middle of the movie for no reason, and used your own characters rather than being the 23489076038576th person to use generic Madness grunts, this could be up there for a daily award. As is, it's nothing we've not seen before, but it's worth a protect despite zero originality.