jonthomson's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[WIP!!! Intro sketch "Down the Problemhole" WIP]

So, hold on, there is not only no movie in this upload, but you've not uploaded the entirety of what you shouldn't upload without a movie anyway? Just make the final movie.

RabidtheRabbit responds:

im working on it :) but yeah, good point, wanted to upload this as a work in progress kinda thing, but apparently i did something wrong (new on newgrounds)

[Jamie Speed Paint]

Boring video that shows us nothing interesting, only something that at the end should go straight to the art portal, and lame youtube spam in the comments to boot.

LittleWolfie responds:

Gee thanks :( i try tho.....

[Coming Soon!]

Contentless 10 second clip that tells us nothing about your upcoming series, isn't interesting in the slightest and amounts to nothing but spam for your youtube channel.

[Second WIP]

Don't submit incomplete works to the Portal. There's no reason for anyone to watch this, it's a three second low framerate animation of two cats doing nothing of interest with some terrible music in the background.

[Sonic Parkour]

Don't submit test animations to the Portal - use Dumping Grounds if you absolutely have to show us a short Sonic sprite animation with no sound and 70% of the screen being white. This sort of thing is horribly overdone and your version isn't interesting in the slightest.

[Madness Test #1]

Boring, short Madness loop. Completely unoriginal, didn't need to be uploaded, same as any test. Come up with your own ideas.

[DJ Roommates & Their Pets (short)]

The trouble with something being popular on Vine is that it's never going to be long enough to have any content whatsoever, as is the case here. At least you're only wasting six seconds of your life.

[Trashman]

Not a bad little short. Interesting animation style, worth the quick look. Could really have used some sound though.

PencilPals responds:

We appreciate your critique! This was our first animation, next time we'll include audio too!

[My intro!]

Pointless upload. Nobody is interested in introductions without an actual movie after them.

[Madness animation - TEST #1]

Do not submit tests to the Portal. Use Dumping Grounds. Congratulations, you can do a three second Madness loop. Try something original next time.