Incredibly short loop with irrelevant excessively loud music, no real story, animation is OK albeit simplistic, but without any sort of substance to it, this is completely pointless. Make it longer with actual content and basic things like a preloader and you might get something worth protecting.
Yeah sorry about the loud music i was looking into preloaders when i realized that the music was just kicking off i would have liked to have a warning. A story would be nice to and more movement with good action shots you can bet ill be working hard on the next one
I have no idea what that was. Seven seconds of weakly drawn nonsense. Make something more substantial next time.
Thank you for the feedback. I'll definitely try to improve on my plots in the future.
Too short, sounds are awful, not completely hopeless but future works need a lot of improvement, particularly adding more content
Unbelievably boring parking shovelware garbage, looks worse than GTA did two decades ago, controls are horrible. Don't submit junk like this ever again.
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Don't keep submitting continual versions of this. Either use dumping grounds to get feedback, or just finish it.
Somewhat different game to a lot of the stuff that's seen here, so worth a play for that by itself. Requires a little bit of thought, so credit for that. Visuals are basic and soundtrack is awful, but there's enough gameplay here for it to be worth a play
i like this a lot. it's pretty chilled, and i cannot disagree with your description that it is intended to be atmospheric. nice work sir.
Not really my cup of tea
It's decent enough, but it's all a bit bleepy and passive, as someone said below it really lacks a decent punch to it. Not sure if it's really drum and bass or something that's trying to be an entire different genre. Worth a listen? Yes. Worth its current 4.4 score? Probably not.
"Worth" is a matter of taste and opinion. If that's what you think, you are entitled to your opinion. Score does not matter to me, reviews are what count. If it's not what you like, don't review at all, although I appreciate the comment. This was my entry into Liquid (sub-genre of Drum 'n' Bass.) It was my building block of my feel for future songs. There's a deeper meaning in my tracks, from this song onward. Obviously, you didn't "listen".
created solidly, the track accurately recreates a lot of the original atmosphere of where the track actually comes from. recommended.
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