jonthomson's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Clockmiration]

It's perfect. Absolutely perfect.

[My new power in animations]

It's just a 5-10 second loop where nothing really happens. Not completely awful, it does at least have backgrounds, sounds, is your own ideas and animates alright, but there's no real content to make this worth a watch. Build what you've got into a longer animation.

[Madness Combat Test]

Don't submit tests to the Portal, use Dumping Grounds for feedback. Also come up with your own ideas.

[Zoom practice]

Don't upload tests.

SomeBloke23 responds:

I uploaded it because I wanted to know what I can improve on,so I only uploaded it for feedback

[Stickman Kick]

Really not good. It's five seconds, there's no background, only one thing happens... needs to be a heck of a lot longer with more stuff going on.

MBZretlair responds:

thx for good advises

[Madness Combat 11: Expurgation]

Wasn't expecting to see a new Madness movie from the actual creator, and it's much appreciated to see the original article as opposed to the armies of ripoff merchants. Nice clean cut animation, nice violence, and the music fit quite nicely. I just felt it was way too long and nonsensical compared with earlier entries in the series, I didn't find the plotline and concept to really fit in with what I would have expected to see. Well worth the watch but definitely not one of the best in the series.

[cute pup]

It's a two second loop of what appears to be a dog wearing a beret doing nothing much at all. Completely useless submission.

peachkuns responds:

Understandable, think i did this 2 years ago for a buddy for fun, didn't now if i should post it or not, so decided to just go for it, hopefully future ones are better ahahah

[Green vs Blue]

Generic fifteen second stick fight which is pretty disjointed with not much of anything happening. Lacks anything really original in a genre which needs that, at least it has some backgrounds and sounds

[A.V.T.S Episode06 Trailer]

If this is a trailer, why are you uploading that here rather than the full video?

[Sonic Vs Shadow WIP Animation]

If it's a work in progress, don't upload it, wait until it's finished and use Dumping Grounds for feedback. If it's only going to be a test when it's done, don't even bother doing that.