jonthomson's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ryu vs Ken Short animation]

Probably just about worth protecting. OK sprite animation, goes on for a bit, sound effects seem to work alright, future ones could need a bit more comedy/story/length though

RandomMugen responds:

Thanks man! I agree. My Future ones will need to have some story with it and length. Not sure how I'll do comedy xD. I'll try to improve though. Thanks for your Review!

[Little Swordsman And The Gorglops]

Just about passable. The animation's OK, there's a decent bit of length and violence, it's worth the one watch. Plenty that could be worked on - add some sound, make the backgrounds more interesting than a white screen, and for the love of god don't beg vote 5 or spam external channels.

[mc test[2]]

Do not use the Portal for test animations. Use Dumping Grounds to get feedback on a two second Madness loop. Come back to the Portal when you have a completed animation, ideally with your own characters and style rather than ripping off something Krinkels was doing perfectly fine a decade ago.

[An Awesome Stick Fight]

This needs lots of work - at five seconds it's far too short. It's just a stick fight - we've seen millions of these. It has some sound but it needs a background, a story, more to it.

Flashkid77 responds:

Yes. I fully understand and I agree to it as we. But I am able to manage this with a disturbing mouse and some frames. And as I mentioned it's a part of my upcoming tournament. Also, it's my first animation. Aren't you being too harsh on a new animator Jon?

[Intro]

Do not upload just an intro. Upload an actual movie with it. Nobody is interested in anything for your Youtube channel, this is Newgrounds.

Julian-Martinez-Rosa responds:

SHUT THE FRICK UP I HAD 40 SUBS

[Marc Wars]

Hmm, it's got some nice drawing and animation, but it's fairly nonsensical, and bloats its runtime by having half the movie be credits. Might be worth one watch but that's about it.

KingComics responds:

You make a good point. thank you for feedback

[[Animation test] Goku SSJ God]

Don't upload tests to the Portal. Use Dumping Grounds. This had zero content and hence gets zero stars.

cvillart responds:

ok thanks

[ROMP.FLA]

Nice to see you back and making Madness stuff, rather than the trillions of low quality ripoff merchants that infest the Portal nowadays. Nice music and plenty of action, probably not quite at the peak of earlier work but still well worth a view with plenty of the classic violence that NG was made on.

[Funny Stickman Animation]

It has a lot more to it than a lot of first animations, in that it actually has sound, it has somewhat of a payoff at the end, and the animation isn't too bad. It's just really short and lacks enough hilarity/violence/whatever to make it worth more than I'm giving it - you've got something going, just try to expand things into something more in depth for your next upload

PrabsAnimation responds:

Thanks jonthomson, will do longer video next time and will try making it more exciting.

[Animated Teaser 08: Waiting]

What was that? Seven seconds of a woman playing with a phone? No content, no sound, nothing of interest, no idea why you would upload this.