jonthomson's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[First Attempt]

It's not bad, and it surprised me enough not to vote to blam it - there's quite a lot more detail there than most things of this ilk, but I can't give it more than 2 because it's still very limited. No sound, no backgrounds, it doesn't tell any sort of story, and it's not even ten seconds long. A lot of potential here, but try to make into a coherent decent length animation.

[CaptainCarbonara Loop]

Decent enough short loop, I like the music and graphical style, quite cleverly done as a loop.

SuperPhil64 responds:

Thanks, glad you liked it!

[Fatsack: BWDS ep 1]

OK little short with some very nice graphics and animation, and I like the style, it just doesn't do enough for me - there's no story and having a quarter of the movie be credits seems excessive.

chluaid responds:

They're very short because my rule for this series is that each script fits on a collector card. Those cards are Patreon rewards.

[I Am The Sand Guardian]

Generally if you're basing something off a vine, you probably shouldn't upload it as there's nowhere near enough content seeing how they're six seconds long. That's exactly what happens here, the drawing/animations are OK but it's over before it starts.

[BSE V6 Round 1]

It's just about passable. It's not an original idea at all, doesn't have a preloader, loops endlessly, and is far too short, but it looks OK and has a bit more detail to it than most stick movies.

[Jamie Speed Paint]

Boring video that shows us nothing interesting, only something that at the end should go straight to the art portal, and lame youtube spam in the comments to boot.

LittleWolfie responds:

Gee thanks :( i try tho.....

[Second WIP]

Don't submit incomplete works to the Portal. There's no reason for anyone to watch this, it's a three second low framerate animation of two cats doing nothing of interest with some terrible music in the background.