jonthomson's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Minecraft Shorts Preview]

Terrible. Absolutely nothing happens in the first half where you're just clicking buttons, and absolutely nothing of interest happens in the second half. I have no idea what this is supposed to be a preview of, next time just post your finished movie first rather than showing us basically nothing other than plugs for your Youtube channel.

Annmariesch76 responds:

I'm really doing this for newgrounds, its more for my YouTube channel

[Maru Nyan Cat]

Poor no effort parody. Lacking anything of interest, anyone can work out exactly what it'll do from the title.

[Madness Jebus tests]

Nothing worth watching here. They're extremely short tests of a genre that's been completely done to death. No sound. Only gets half a star as it has a working preloader.

[Madness Test 2]

There is no need to ever submit a test to the Portal - you can use Dumping Grounds and ask in the forums for feedback. And frankly, there's no need to submit another Madness ripoff - this is nowhere near as good as Krinkels, and nowhere near as good as any of the good ripoffs that exist, so it'll just sit with the thousands of bad versions that infect the Portal. Come up with your own ideas.

[Kinda of a first]

Incredibly short loop with irrelevant excessively loud music, no real story, animation is OK albeit simplistic, but without any sort of substance to it, this is completely pointless. Make it longer with actual content and basic things like a preloader and you might get something worth protecting.

MrFunnybuns responds:

Yeah sorry about the loud music i was looking into preloaders when i realized that the music was just kicking off i would have liked to have a warning. A story would be nice to and more movement with good action shots you can bet ill be working hard on the next one

[Fat]

I have no idea what that was. Seven seconds of weakly drawn nonsense. Make something more substantial next time.

Chpenguin responds:

Thank you for the feedback. I'll definitely try to improve on my plots in the future.

[I Can Dance]

Animation/drawing's a bit limited, song quality isn't great, and the movie's generally not that interesting, but there's enough there for it to get a couple of stars

[Where's my sandwich?]

Boring 12 second crudely drawn animation with no humour, no content and no reason to watch.