jonthomson's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Am I the one?]

Average. A bit on the short side, somewhat nonsensical, sound effects are pretty poor, but some of the graphical effects are alright. Something to work on, ideally add a preloader and stop it endlessly looping.

uldbridt responds:

ty for your responce, ill think about that next time

[Gangster Cowboy ep2]

Meh. It's a stick movie, nothing original here, and the quality of the graphics is horrendous, looks like it's been imported through about three different programs and is awfully blocky. That needs to be tidied up, and ideally increase the framerate as it's a bit slow. On the plus side, it's got a decent amount of action and interesting kills, and the sounds are solid enough, so it's worth a view if you like the genre. Just look to clean up the visuals in future installments.

[The perfect Video]

Bad start in that it's just looking like spam for your youtube channel, audio sync is ok, but it's far, far too boring and slow to develop - nothing here to grab your attention before turning off and watching something else.

[My first animation Vegeta]

Unoriginal sprite movie. Lacks storyline, animation is very limited/choppy, sound quality isn't the best. Plenty of room to improve, but I've seen worse - at least it has a bit of length to it. Tidy up the animation, come up with something more interesting than "omg fight" and you'll score a lot higher.

DDO-Productions responds:

Thanks :D

[StarTrek NextGen Trailer]

Trailers are a waste of time at best, and this does little to make me want to keep an eye out for a finished version. Animation/visuals are limited at best, sound levels very low, doesn't tell us much of anything at all.

TheAlphaMoose responds:

Yeah I understand. I'm pretty happy with it though and I'm just trying to build a little hype is all. you make a good point tho.

[Pacman..]

Import quality is poor, far too short to be interesting, what is there is dull, needs a lot of work to be worthy of viewing

Tortology responds:

I'm sorry that it was too short.. I was just testing Adobe Flash CS6.. This was my first animation..