jonthomson's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Charmander's evolution]

Boring 9 second short of a Pokemon evolving. Looks alright but it just lacks anything interesting.

[WHY!]

Just about worth a protect. Too short to be worth more than that, with a more interesting finish other than just "why" it might be, as the sound usage is fine and the art/animation is acceptable enough. Extend this sort of idea and you could have a pretty good movie, but it's incredibly hard to recommend anything less than 10 seconds long.

olive6608 responds:

Thanks for the advice. I'm fine with my "acceptable enough" art style and length of the video for now :)

[Cake]

Nonsensical ten second short that contains nothing funny, doesn't have particularly good visuals or animations, with incredibly annoying sounds. Far too lacking in redeeming features to be worth a watch.

[knife training]

Yeah, it's a loop. It's not a bad loop, but it's just that. Doesn't really matter how good three seconds of something is, it's just three seconds - with no substance it's really just a technical demo.

[Game Grumps Animated]

Boring, pointless loop. Generic garbage that's based on other people's ideas.

miodragvuk9 responds:

ok so what do you suggest i do to fix this

[birds]

It's a shame that the payoff at the end didn't come on the back of a load of garbage - music is awful, animation is incredibly basic, graphics are poor and there's no real content. If there was something more substantial as to why the one bird starts shooting the others, then you might have something worth a watch. As it is, it's pointless.