jonthomson's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Game Grumps Textified - Enlightment]

Terrible waste of time. 15 seconds of you posting up words with audio background that isn't even your own. No reason for anybody to watch this.

flummox3d responds:

I don't see why animating words to audio that isn't mine could be a problem (it's a fan work after all - for example "Game Grumps Animated" is a thing), but hey, I see where you're coming from. Thanks for the review :) Sorry you didn't like it :(

[ShadeMachine Intro]

Pointless 10 second intro clip. Should only be submitted before an actual movie.

ShadeMachine responds:

I agree. But, Its first ever animation i have completed, so... a bit excited. And wanted to know how good it actually is

[Madness Combat Test]

Do not submit test animations to the Portal. Use Dumping Grounds and the forums to get feedback. Now that you've done this, yes, it's a 12 second Madness animation that seems to work. Next time, try a real move with your own ideas, we're overrun with Krinkels ripoffs.

taguse123 responds:

ok :/

[Speedpaint Lake girl]

Pointless video of you drawing. This isn't YouTube. If you think your drawing is good, submit it to the art portal, but this sort of thing doesn't belong here.

AngelsDead responds:

Please reply again if you have some usefull critics so I can learn and get better at making interesting speedpaints.

[ScribbleFights]

Just about passable. SImplistic graphic style is fine, animation is mostly OK although the framerate is a touch slow, sounds OK, but you need to extend this further and understand how to introduce a preloader and stop it looping.

Democane responds:

I'll take it!

[Phyche Screams Trailer]

Contentless trailer. Tells us nothing about the final movie, which is what you should be uploading, rather than this.

Akaruss responds:

Im so sorry to hear that. This is more of a teaser than a trailer...just to build up more anticipation for the series. Sorry for all the misconceptions. The real trailer will be posted when ready. The Animation is still in production, so just hang in there :)

[test upload, new animatio]

Looks pretty good, has potential, but don't submit incomplete test movies to the Portal. http://www.newgrounds.com/dump is the place for that.

RPRMT0054611 responds:

i honestly didn't know... silly noob me. XD