jonthomson's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

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Dull five seconds Madness loop. Would lack anywhere near the required level of content to be worth watching if it actually had original ideas. As you've gone for one of the most overdone genres, I can't recommend it to anyone. Make something that's your own idea and make it a lot longer next time.

SCwzf responds:

eh，it is a dull one，i will try to make a new one，longer of course

[WHY!]

Just about worth a protect. Too short to be worth more than that, with a more interesting finish other than just "why" it might be, as the sound usage is fine and the art/animation is acceptable enough. Extend this sort of idea and you could have a pretty good movie, but it's incredibly hard to recommend anything less than 10 seconds long.

olive6608 responds:

Thanks for the advice. I'm fine with my "acceptable enough" art style and length of the video for now :)

[Game Grumps Animated]

Boring, pointless loop. Generic garbage that's based on other people's ideas.

miodragvuk9 responds:

ok so what do you suggest i do to fix this

[Minecraft Shorts Preview]

Terrible. Absolutely nothing happens in the first half where you're just clicking buttons, and absolutely nothing of interest happens in the second half. I have no idea what this is supposed to be a preview of, next time just post your finished movie first rather than showing us basically nothing other than plugs for your Youtube channel.

Annmariesch76 responds:

I'm really doing this for newgrounds, its more for my YouTube channel

[Kinda of a first]

Incredibly short loop with irrelevant excessively loud music, no real story, animation is OK albeit simplistic, but without any sort of substance to it, this is completely pointless. Make it longer with actual content and basic things like a preloader and you might get something worth protecting.

MrFunnybuns responds:

Yeah sorry about the loud music i was looking into preloaders when i realized that the music was just kicking off i would have liked to have a warning. A story would be nice to and more movement with good action shots you can bet ill be working hard on the next one

[Fat]

I have no idea what that was. Seven seconds of weakly drawn nonsense. Make something more substantial next time.

Chpenguin responds:

Thank you for the feedback. I'll definitely try to improve on my plots in the future.

[Demo test head turn]

Zero content seven second clip of a badly drawn head rotating. You don't need to submit tests like this, and don't know why you thought submitting it was a good idea.

lamgelus responds:

i will improve in the future if you want to check my latest work, please follow me, thanks for your comment