jonthomson's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[ShadeMachine Intro]

Pointless 10 second intro clip. Should only be submitted before an actual movie.

ShadeMachine responds:

I agree. But, Its first ever animation i have completed, so... a bit excited. And wanted to know how good it actually is

[Madness Combat Test]

Do not submit test animations to the Portal. Use Dumping Grounds and the forums to get feedback. Now that you've done this, yes, it's a 12 second Madness animation that seems to work. Next time, try a real move with your own ideas, we're overrun with Krinkels ripoffs.

taguse123 responds:

ok :/

[ANDROID VS MY LAPTOP TRAILER]

Horribly pointless trailer. Trailers are useless at the best of times, time should be better spent actually making the movie, but this tells us nothing - there is absolutely no animation, sound, plot hints, NOTHING.

xtray responds:

i forgot to add sound plus no animation in trailer

[Incident: K3n4m11]

Only about a minute once you cut out the excessive outro, animation isn't amazing, no real story, only redeeming feature is it's using a decent track off the audio portal. Might have been worth a higher score if it had your own original ideas, but it's a simple ripoff of Krinkels' ideas, and there's not enough there even if you're a Madness fan. Avoid.

ExodusTerminator responds:

Well... i'll try

[Speedpaint Lake girl]

Pointless video of you drawing. This isn't YouTube. If you think your drawing is good, submit it to the art portal, but this sort of thing doesn't belong here.

AngelsDead responds:

Please reply again if you have some usefull critics so I can learn and get better at making interesting speedpaints.

[Madness'sFighter(Trailer)]

So let me get this straight - this trailer, which lasted for 30 seconds but only actually showed us 3 seconds of animation, is telling us that in the next six months, you will not come up with any of your own ideas, but just rip off Krinkels. Stop this right now, come up with your own ideas, and quit wasting everybody's time with tired overdone stuff.

DeronMadness responds:

Waiting the September 22

[ScribbleFights]

Just about passable. SImplistic graphic style is fine, animation is mostly OK although the framerate is a touch slow, sounds OK, but you need to extend this further and understand how to introduce a preloader and stop it looping.

Democane responds:

I'll take it!

[Phyche Screams Trailer]

Contentless trailer. Tells us nothing about the final movie, which is what you should be uploading, rather than this.

Akaruss responds:

Im so sorry to hear that. This is more of a teaser than a trailer...just to build up more anticipation for the series. Sorry for all the misconceptions. The real trailer will be posted when ready. The Animation is still in production, so just hang in there :)

[test upload, new animatio]

Looks pretty good, has potential, but don't submit incomplete test movies to the Portal. http://www.newgrounds.com/dump is the place for that.

RPRMT0054611 responds:

i honestly didn't know... silly noob me. XD

[She Ra Imp Speedpaint]

Boring video of you drawing something which you've correctly submitted to the art portal once it was finished. Not really something that I want to see in the Flash portal as a genre.

megadrivesonic responds:

says the man whos only submissions are spam that were submitted on clock day.