jonthomson's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

["Dolan Lives" Trailer]

Five seconds of zooming in on a giant Donald Duck head. Do not submit incomplete works or trailers, especially when it's not even a trailer for something coming to Newgrounds - this just amounts to pointless spam.

TMNTSam responds:

Oops. Sorry.

[Final Fantasy 7 # 3]

Needs a lot of work. When seeing the length of it, I think there may be a decent level of content, but half of it is the intro and outro. Which leaves only 20 seconds of actual content, which can be boiled down to one joke, which isn't that amusing. Please don't make a fourth without large improvements.

Wondermeow responds:

Thanks for the feedback, it was a short joke lol noted.

Kind regards

Wondermeow

[Am I the one?]

Average. A bit on the short side, somewhat nonsensical, sound effects are pretty poor, but some of the graphical effects are alright. Something to work on, ideally add a preloader and stop it endlessly looping.

uldbridt responds:

ty for your responce, ill think about that next time

[My first animation Vegeta]

Unoriginal sprite movie. Lacks storyline, animation is very limited/choppy, sound quality isn't the best. Plenty of room to improve, but I've seen worse - at least it has a bit of length to it. Tidy up the animation, come up with something more interesting than "omg fight" and you'll score a lot higher.

DDO-Productions responds:

Thanks :D

[StarTrek NextGen Trailer]

Trailers are a waste of time at best, and this does little to make me want to keep an eye out for a finished version. Animation/visuals are limited at best, sound levels very low, doesn't tell us much of anything at all.

TheAlphaMoose responds:

Yeah I understand. I'm pretty happy with it though and I'm just trying to build a little hype is all. you make a good point tho.

[Knight VS Dragon]

Very short movie with little in the way of storyline and lacking in quality animation/visuals. Sound isn't great either. If it was a bit more in-depth it might be worth watching once, right now it isn't even that.

Rylas responds:

This took me 20 minutes if that, my goal for this was to see the sorts of reviews i would get and its a weird mixed bag of praise,advice, discuragment and OMG THIS IS AWESOME which i dont understand lol, my next upload is going to be very different but it wont be for a few weeks

[Pacman..]

Import quality is poor, far too short to be interesting, what is there is dull, needs a lot of work to be worthy of viewing

Tortology responds:

I'm sorry that it was too short.. I was just testing Adobe Flash CS6.. This was my first animation..

[SBURB Loading Screen]

You know what would be good with this submission? An actual movie/game at the end of it. Don't submit just a loading screen, nobody cares about this sort of thing.

Soiked responds:

I'm just hosting it here, I don't really care for ratings.

[Kingdom hearts WIP]

Awful. Unfinished and extremely short, terrible graphics with poor animation, music that makes my ears bleed. The Portal isn't the place for incomplete work, and frankly it isn't the place for this even if you do finish it without massive improvement.

gatekid3 responds:

i understand there are many flaws, but theres no way this is absolute garbage. the animation isnt THAT bad. and ive seen plenty of things that are about this length with varying quality.

maybe it is bad. but you dont have to be so rude about your approach.

[short=-=]

Dull five seconds Madness loop. Would lack anywhere near the required level of content to be worth watching if it actually had original ideas. As you've gone for one of the most overdone genres, I can't recommend it to anyone. Make something that's your own idea and make it a lot longer next time.

SCwzf responds:

eh，it is a dull one，i will try to make a new one，longer of course