jonthomson's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[LOGO DESIGN AND ANIMATION FOR A GAME]

This upload seemed to be lacking the actual game after it, and given that the Portal is for complete works this is a pointless upload.

JayantJoshi responds:

The actual game is coming soon this upload is for the reviews of UI ..

[Pixel Ninja]

So much wrong with this. Was expecting something a lot better after that lengthy intro, but that really was the best part of the submission, if the rest was that quality I'd probably protect it. The main entry itself was poor - NOTHING happened, the animation was incredibly limited, the sound effects on the text are among the most annoying I've ever heard. Maybe in a further installment something will happen, but I fear it'd just be yet another low quality stick fight, and as such not be worth watching.

DMD35 responds:

Well Sorry :(

[anger is contagious]

It's a bit random, and there's something about it I kind of like, but then what I thought was a decent length movie is spoiled by the last third of it being credits. If it had a bit more content this would probably be a protect.

JuanAdventure responds:

thanks i will try to get better

[The magic glass]

It's a nice enough background, but that's it. It's a three second animation of a moving glass, there's no content to it that would appeal to any of Newgrounds' target audience even it it wasn't just three seconds long.

[Cinco de Gayo 2]

The animation is OK, but there's no content here. There is no story, no punchline, nothing of interest, half of the runtime is clogged up with excessive intro/outro, it's just nothing

artistunknown responds:

1. There is a story.
2. There is a punchline, it's just very stealthy.
3. Dicks are interesting.
4. The intro and outro take up closer to 1/3 of the video, and I'd hardly say 11 seconds is "excessive". Why does the outro even matter? It's AFTER the video, you don't have to sit through it.
5. Fairly sure it's more than nothing, otherwise it'd just be a blank screen, which you can find on newgrounds pretty frequently :p

[My New Intro!]

You appear to have forgotten the video/movie/game that follows this eight second introduction. Please rectify this.

VivendmaYoutube responds:

That was done on purpose, you would know If you read the title..

[Animated Intro]

It's an intro. That's great. Where's the movie that follows it?

SedatedHippo responds:

I will start putting movies with it, I'm really new to all this. I just wanted to see if it's a good piece of work in of itself.

I appreciate you taking the time to watch it.

Cheers

[Intro]

Newgrounds is a place for content, not for a ten second clip that you place before the content.

THEREALMAGMA responds:

Does anyone do gaming here

[Ryu vs Ken Short animation]

Probably just about worth protecting. OK sprite animation, goes on for a bit, sound effects seem to work alright, future ones could need a bit more comedy/story/length though

RandomMugen responds:

Thanks man! I agree. My Future ones will need to have some story with it and length. Not sure how I'll do comedy xD. I'll try to improve though. Thanks for your Review!

[An Awesome Stick Fight]

This needs lots of work - at five seconds it's far too short. It's just a stick fight - we've seen millions of these. It has some sound but it needs a background, a story, more to it.

Flashkid77 responds:

Yes. I fully understand and I agree to it as we. But I am able to manage this with a disturbing mouse and some frames. And as I mentioned it's a part of my upcoming tournament. Also, it's my first animation. Aren't you being too harsh on a new animator Jon?