jonthomson's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fatsack: BWDS ep 1]

OK little short with some very nice graphics and animation, and I like the style, it just doesn't do enough for me - there's no story and having a quarter of the movie be credits seems excessive.

chluaid responds:

They're very short because my rule for this series is that each script fits on a collector card. Those cards are Patreon rewards.

[WIP!!! Intro sketch "Down the Problemhole" WIP]

So, hold on, there is not only no movie in this upload, but you've not uploaded the entirety of what you shouldn't upload without a movie anyway? Just make the final movie.

RabidtheRabbit responds:

im working on it :) but yeah, good point, wanted to upload this as a work in progress kinda thing, but apparently i did something wrong (new on newgrounds)

[Jamie Speed Paint]

Boring video that shows us nothing interesting, only something that at the end should go straight to the art portal, and lame youtube spam in the comments to boot.

LittleWolfie responds:

Gee thanks :( i try tho.....

[Trashman]

Not a bad little short. Interesting animation style, worth the quick look. Could really have used some sound though.

PencilPals responds:

We appreciate your critique! This was our first animation, next time we'll include audio too!

[Madness: Zombifacation PREVIEW]

Do not submit contentless previews to the Portal. This is telling us nothing about your movie other than there's a load of Madness guys killing each other, which we've all seen a million times before. Quit now and come up with your own ideas.

Sherklov responds:

Wow. I did not expect that. So, what you're saying is that I should just abandon this entire project?

[Madness: A Source of Gold ::preview::]

Probably should have just waited to release the full movie when it's done, which anyone should do, and waiting for Madness Day might actually get the thing protected as it's really not that good in what is a genre that was done to death five years ago.

d0rp90 responds:

I wanted to release it here first so I could get feedback, and make sure I was going in the right direction. I didn't wanna release the whole thing and then find out its shit.

[Jelly Martions Trailer "CLOCK DAY 2015"]

Complete waste of space. Gets half a star because you list Clock Day as a tag.

BuddhaBilski responds:

H8trs gonna h8te!

[madness original 1]

Unoriginal Madness rubbish, is on a never ending loop, loop is only about 10 seconds to begin with, info bars at the top and bottom obstruct large portions of the screen. Come up with your own ideas and make it at least five times longer and it might be worth protecting.

MFC-CFJ responds:

Thank for your help= = this animation just a tast

[LoL - Love it when you ward]

Incredibly dull short, animation levels are quite limited, try not churning out two of these a day and start putting effort into them if you want to get any sort of decent ratings.

Rixian responds:

Thank you :'D (This isn't sarcasm, it's genuine thanks)

[Game Grumps Textified - Enlightment]

Terrible waste of time. 15 seconds of you posting up words with audio background that isn't even your own. No reason for anybody to watch this.

flummox3d responds:

I don't see why animating words to audio that isn't mine could be a problem (it's a fan work after all - for example "Game Grumps Animated" is a thing), but hey, I see where you're coming from. Thanks for the review :) Sorry you didn't like it :(