jonthomson's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[ShadeMachine Intro]

Pointless 10 second intro clip. Should only be submitted before an actual movie.

ShadeMachine responds:

I agree. But, Its first ever animation i have completed, so... a bit excited. And wanted to know how good it actually is

[Madness Combat Test]

Do not submit test animations to the Portal. Use Dumping Grounds and the forums to get feedback. Now that you've done this, yes, it's a 12 second Madness animation that seems to work. Next time, try a real move with your own ideas, we're overrun with Krinkels ripoffs.

taguse123 responds:

ok :/

[ANDROID VS MY LAPTOP TRAILER]

Horribly pointless trailer. Trailers are useless at the best of times, time should be better spent actually making the movie, but this tells us nothing - there is absolutely no animation, sound, plot hints, NOTHING.

xtray responds:

i forgot to add sound plus no animation in trailer

[Alarm Clock]

Not particularly interesting. No real humour, animation techniques are simple as is the graphical style, rather short, audio's synced ok. Just nothing here worth watching.

[NewGrounds Vs YouTube]

Incredibly basic. No preloader and it infinitely loops, animation is very, very simple, no sound, outro is almost as long as the animation itself. Lacking in more or less everything. Gets a star because fuck people dumping their Youtube crap here.

[Incident: K3n4m11]

Only about a minute once you cut out the excessive outro, animation isn't amazing, no real story, only redeeming feature is it's using a decent track off the audio portal. Might have been worth a higher score if it had your own original ideas, but it's a simple ripoff of Krinkels' ideas, and there's not enough there even if you're a Madness fan. Avoid.

ExodusTerminator responds:

Well... i'll try

[Sagat vs Katy Perry]

Not a bad little joke, but far too short to be anything more than a bare pass

[Speedpaint Lake girl]

Pointless video of you drawing. This isn't YouTube. If you think your drawing is good, submit it to the art portal, but this sort of thing doesn't belong here.

AngelsDead responds:

Please reply again if you have some usefull critics so I can learn and get better at making interesting speedpaints.

[Critic to Iron manTeaser]

The point of trailers, when they have a point at all, which is rarely, is to give us information about a forthcoming movie/game. Here, there is no point, as you have ALREADY DONE THE MOVIE and this exists as nothing but spam to divert users to your Youtube channel. Just upload the finished movie.

[Madness'sFighter(Trailer)]

So let me get this straight - this trailer, which lasted for 30 seconds but only actually showed us 3 seconds of animation, is telling us that in the next six months, you will not come up with any of your own ideas, but just rip off Krinkels. Stop this right now, come up with your own ideas, and quit wasting everybody's time with tired overdone stuff.

DeronMadness responds:

Waiting the September 22