jonthomson's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Relatable: Conversation]

If you're going to have a movie with no preloader that continually loops, only two colours, next to no animation, then it needs to have an incredibly hilarious payoff. Which it doesn't. You've clearly got some level of understanding of how things work, but you just opt not to use it.

[BLAMCO BOOM!]

Heh, good old fashioned comedy nuking things. Works for me.

[Are You Happy?]

Not really for me. Animation is pretty limited and repeated, but smooth enough, art style is simplistic but works, voices are frequently fast and incomprehendible. Actual storyline isn't interesting/funny enough to keep my attention. There's skills to work with, but needs better scripts and voice acting if you ask me

["Dolan Lives" Trailer]

Five seconds of zooming in on a giant Donald Duck head. Do not submit incomplete works or trailers, especially when it's not even a trailer for something coming to Newgrounds - this just amounts to pointless spam.

TMNTSam responds:

Oops. Sorry.

[Little Mac's Legacy]

Good quality stuff - interesting concept, level of graphics/animation fine, moderately funny concept/ending, although there was potential to have a better payoff. Worth a view.

[Final Fantasy 7 # 3]

Needs a lot of work. When seeing the length of it, I think there may be a decent level of content, but half of it is the intro and outro. Which leaves only 20 seconds of actual content, which can be boiled down to one joke, which isn't that amusing. Please don't make a fourth without large improvements.

Wondermeow responds:

Thanks for the feedback, it was a short joke lol noted.

Kind regards

Wondermeow