jonthomson's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Aria da Capo (Speed Draw)]

We have an art portal. If you want to publish finished works there, go ahead - most of us here really couldn't care about how there created, or need to see the process twice a day

AppleStixTime responds:

If that's true, I could delete my account and call it a day since that's all I want to post here.

[Zoom practice]

Don't upload tests.

SomeBloke23 responds:

I uploaded it because I wanted to know what I can improve on,so I only uploaded it for feedback

[Stickman Kick]

Really not good. It's five seconds, there's no background, only one thing happens... needs to be a heck of a lot longer with more stuff going on.

MBZretlair responds:

thx for good advises

[cute pup]

It's a two second loop of what appears to be a dog wearing a beret doing nothing much at all. Completely useless submission.

peachkuns responds:

Understandable, think i did this 2 years ago for a buddy for fun, didn't now if i should post it or not, so decided to just go for it, hopefully future ones are better ahahah

[Falling Leaf Animation]

Animation's OK, it's a bit minimalistic though and it's not really the sort of thing I come to Newgrounds to see, seven seconds of a leaf falling isn't that interesting.

Artbyazpen responds:

Okay! I appreciate your candor! I posted it mainly as an introduction to the basics I've been learning. I'll try and post more interesting stuff in the future! Thank you!

[Madness Incident]

Meh. It's a bunch of Madness guys shooting each other. It has some length, has some backgrounds and is generally well animated with backgrounds, sounds and everything, but it's not anything that Krinkels didn't do better a decade ago. Make your own characters and ideas with the skills you have and you'll do far better rather than swimming in a sea of shit ripoffs.

StHeromax responds:

Yeah, I know that the animtion has no plot at all, but I already have some ideas to realize, characters and a lot of things that I want to do, but I can't because of low skill. Of coarse, I won't stop only on idea that some mad guys are shooting each other without any reason. Next time I will try to make some plot before to make fights look at least less pointless.

[Sanford the Table Basher]

Generic 4 second Krinkels ripoff. Has a bit of a better framerate than most similar things uploaded here and you've at least put a background in, but it's still 4 seconds, it's not your ideas, and it's not something we haven't seen thousands of times before. Something a bit longer with your own ideas gets protected.

MAnimationsNStuff responds:

hey how about i upload it again but more different
also i practiced alot before i actually uploaded this

[MADNESS:AVENGATION]

Generic Krinkels ripoff, no originality, not much happening, half of the movie is cutscenes, and then when things might get interesting you indicate it's a trailer. Don't continue this, come up with your own ideas and then complete a movie all in one go, this is going nowhere.

VOUIP responds:

These are my ideas and there is no much similitary with Madness Combat .The "SOMEWHERE IN NEVADA" is used by all and is now a meme of the mc community . The cutsene are needed for a trailer but i'll try to reduce them.
But thank you for your comment .

[New intro (intro)]

Newgrounds isn't the place for contentless movies like this. Create something to go after the intro clip and upload it all as one.

laginlife responds:

sorry about that, I'll just post completed projects after this

[Pokemon battle WIP]

This might be ok when it's finished if you add some sounds, backgrounds and make it a lot longer. Don't upload it until you have though, the Portal's for complete work.

8BitUltra responds:

Ah ok I gotcha, Ill keep that in mind next time