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[Mole Miner Pre-Alpha]

Calling something a "pre-alpha" indicates it is at a stage where it is nowhere near a stage that could be called an "alpha", which should be not uploaded to the Portal, which is for completed works. Quit wasting people's time here and finish your project before uploading.

[flying dorian]

Wow, I've never seen a version of Flappy Bird with bad graphics before.

SuperDorianBoom responds:

thank you man, first i made it on scratch, second, its my first game so bruh

[Iceler's Mod (Pre-Alpha)]

The Portal is intended for completed works, not half finished projects. If you're saying yourself that it is incredibly buggy and not even at a phase where you can consider it a work in progress, work on it a lot further (i.e. finish the game) before uploading it.

[Pré Alpha - West Runner: Remake]

Do not submit incomplete test projects to the Portal, which is intended for completed works. Use Dumping Grounds if you want feedback on work in progress.

[jSandbox v1.0a]

Do not submit incomplete works to the Portal, which is intended for finished projects. If you must get feedback, use Dumping Grounds.

EG10Official responds:

bro are you on drugs, this is literally not incomplete

[Deads Unite (Prototype)]

If you have no intention of finishing the game, don't upload some junk demo.

SKGbop responds:

i actually do, ive been working for years, restarting multiple times. the game will have 13 bosses and 30 levels. i promise to release it.

2025 edit: still working! I've restarted two more times and I'm currently working on moveset and attack patterns, after feeling conflicted about how much preserving the original vision of this project mattered to me, i changed the name of the game to Dead Unification, ive reworked the story a lot to remove some... details (still kept the main character being named Harper... before i came out as trans and changed my name to Harper... thats just so funny to me), new itch.io page coming soon, im also planning on releasing a trailer within this year, the game will be available on steam and as a demo in web browser That can be upgraded to playing the whole game in a web browser if you log in with steam open ID and own the steam version or make a website account (which I haven't set up yet) and pay for the game directly for browser support and a steam key. none of this has actually been done yet other than the game development itself but development is going quite slowly and The game probably won't be done for a very long time